hmmm
well i see you put a lot of effort into this but you have alot of work ahead of you
you need to sync the voice acting better. :) tray and do your art work outside of MS paint i cant say for sure its done there but it appears that way and its good for MS paint but thats old news. i think what bothered me most was the fact that the people looked like duplo block people. not bad but it needs work there are 3 essential elements to making flash .
1. the artwork which is animated
2. the audio that is in the flash
3. actual animation
your strongest point was the animation and it was slow it seemed things where moving in slow motion.
not bad but not great.
also trying to get extra score by telling them its for University is only gonna make people vote lower.... and also i dont see how that can be true as no university would grade your work bast on the opnions of the people on this site 60% of the people on ng dont vote basted on artistic or animation skill. its the fall of man!
:) good luck and keep working hard