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you simply dont understand.... no preloader no replay no point no sound and poor animation thing about this says " i belong in the portal" it says "i possibly dont even belong in the alphas.... you need to work on something that has some kind of structure to it. im sure "wisps" might seem impressive to you and i commend you for your work... but seriously... its not impressing anyone else becuse it lacks so much.... dont take this personally its not.
I understand your point. I'm doing this not to impress anybody, but perhaps get some tips. I'm actually not working with adobe, I'm working with a free version called pencil. The one time I tried to put any sound to it, it crashed. I have -no- idea how to work a preloader. And about the animation, I maxed out the amount of frames that I was allowed, or at least could fit on the screen. Thanks for the criticism though!
2 latters one word....
N G ALPHAS!!
hmmm....
crazynuts..... but not crazy go nuts.... i hope im not detecting a downward sprial. just do what you where doing man make fun of it all. you dont have to fall into the line of whats popular! your animations on older stuff was where it was at or the mildly neglected titles.
seriously
what the hell is going on that is the single most confuseing thing ive seen in a while...
o.o.....?
lost and confused.....
lol i was curious and i should have expected some
kind of scare tactic but i jumped. but you honestly make a valid point people need to stop stealing flah animations and make your own. stop ripping them and putting them on youtube there not yours and therefore not yours to put on youtube. its not only aginst the law its wrong. know you know and knowing is half the battle.
ill leave the last part of that to ne next reviewer.
:/ im non-objective.
but due to the fact that i didnt play bio shock i wil lrate it based on an original animation.
the sound was okay but it needed music.
the animation was what i can assume what your capable of and its sub par but given its one of your first few i can look past it.
the art however the actualy backgrounds and moving parts where horrible and hard for me to look at. you could have spent A LOT more time improving that. i mean most of it looks like you moused scenes togeather in a matter of a few minutes
it leaves a lot to be desired.
the story like i said i never played bioshock but i know it was a good game and from what i gather it is fit and i will give you that and a good job but it requires more than the a good flash requires a balance in all aspects.
im sorry i can from my point of view give it a good score it lacks in a few departments. 2/5 4/10
i already sent a lot of time working on this, ive said in the previous reviews that im always working on improving my graphics but it doesn't happen overnight you know?
very mush the possible outcome
but its still not the end... im not happy either way though.
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