KyuubiT's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Life By a Thread]

well. 5 for animation. but you lost half of your 5 for the large list of mouthed and vocal sound effects which would have been better done with actual sound effects. things that require a voice should use a voice. things that require TRUE SFX should use SFX it came off lazy and a little annoying. LOVED the animation it was clean smooth well done use other big time animations as an example anything that's aired on tv with "mouthed" Sound effects ended up being a one time deal or only got 2 or 3 episodes aired. this isn't an attack on you you have talent. just please use actual sounds.

[Nursery Rhymes of Death]

vaguely distressing at the end. but none of those nursery rhymes had anything directly to do with death aside from humpty dumpty.
a good list would be.

1. Mary Mary quite contrary,
How does your garden grow?
With silver bells and cockle shells
And pretty maids all in a row

The rhyme is a reference to Bloody marry a queen who was responsible for the murder countless Protestants. the Garden refers to the cemeteries she fill with there bodies. Silver bells and cockleshells where tools of torture. the maiden refers to a crude sort of guillotine which is of course used to lop peoples heads off

2. Ring around the rosy
A pocketful of posies
"Ashes, Ashes"
We all fall down!

This rhyme dates back to the Great Plague of London in 1665. The symptoms of bubonic plague included a rosy red ring-shaped rash, which inspired the first line. It was believed that the disease was carried by bad smells, so people frequently carried pockets full of fresh herbs, or "posies." The "ashes, ashes" line is believed to refer to the cremation of the bodies of those who died from the plague. (cited brainz.org)

3.London Bridge bridge is falling down, down
Falling down down, falling down, down
London Bridge bridge is falling down, down
My fair lady.

Take a key key and lock padlock her up,
Lock padlock her up, lock padlock her up,
Take a key key and lock padlock her up,
My fair lady.

This nursery rhyme refers to the rise and fall of Anne Boleyn, the second wife of King Henry VIII of England. Boleyn was accused of adultery and incest and was ultimately executed for treason.
(cited Brainz.org)

humpty dumpty was a good one. consider revising :) i'd love to help. :) its been a while since ie done any flash work.

[Neighborhood Watch]

you might consider pitching this to
IFC or Comedy Central.

[Green Acres]

thats a good animation i was going to suggest film festivals if you hadnt done any.

and to tharosthedragon,
its called being ironic.

[George Sr loves Ice Cream]

It could have been longer but it was amusing. and by the way Maeby is not that dark.

[Draculine Verde]

i did like it. your art style is simple intentionally rough. the voices where well done. But this feels like a good animation that was missing its middle. there was an opening animation. a father giving his daughter a dress then she walks out on the wedding the end.... it was seriously missing something.

[Silence of The Lamps]

meh. lets see...
poorly executed joke that makes absolutely no sense... the lip sync was off no offense to the lady voice actor but it felt really.... forced.

the issue i have with this is that like every other soul on Newgrounds your trying to Bogart Egoraptors art and animation style... yay for homage and all but this is down right cut/paste style. do everyone a favor and develop your own style! be they guy who's being copied not the other way around.

nevarky responds:

You don't understand what a style is, I can't take you seriously.

[Drunk Batman and Robin 6]

well.

this would have been funny in like 2002 when flash animations where becoming popular.
let me break this down.

Art: 3
it was rushed ugly and looks like it was done in ms paint.

Animation: 2
it was nto well animated. it was choppy tweeny and what the hell was up with the god damn head bobbing?

Sound: 5
the sound quality was fine but the voice acting was retarded.

Humor: 5
it wasn't bad but it wasn't probably ruined by the voice acting.

in the end it was subpar at best. if you guys where like.... 15? i would have said it was good work.
but your too old and hoping too smart to think rushed work is worth much. i am dissapointed in this. and before you go on to talk about how you have a website and all that stuff understand that it means little anyone with a basic knowledge of HTML and a little spare cash can have a website.

If you want this to be worth something take some time and do it right.

oldmanorange responds:

I find it funny that this guy likes to give criticism but apparently can't take it on his own projects. If you don't like something, that's cool, but keep it to yourself. No reason write up a whole essay on everything you don't like. Don't be a little bitch about It.

[Playstation 4]

fun but it felt like you where trying too hard to be the egoraptor.