well.
this would have been funny in like 2002 when flash animations where becoming popular.
let me break this down.
Art: 3
it was rushed ugly and looks like it was done in ms paint.
Animation: 2
it was nto well animated. it was choppy tweeny and what the hell was up with the god damn head bobbing?
Sound: 5
the sound quality was fine but the voice acting was retarded.
Humor: 5
it wasn't bad but it wasn't probably ruined by the voice acting.
in the end it was subpar at best. if you guys where like.... 15? i would have said it was good work.
but your too old and hoping too smart to think rushed work is worth much. i am dissapointed in this. and before you go on to talk about how you have a website and all that stuff understand that it means little anyone with a basic knowledge of HTML and a little spare cash can have a website.
If you want this to be worth something take some time and do it right.