seriously dude keep this up (maybe make it more "kidd frendly and this could be network worthy stuff. the animation is clean smooth, you obviously gotten storyboard down for this kinda stuff. I cannot wait to see more work from you and i expect you to consider more pc subjects and ptuching oyur work to a network. heck KND was pitched 5 or 10 times before they took it and it was one of there most popular shows for years before the creator decided it needed to end. you could do it dude. i loved the story by the way it just wouldn't be considered age appropriate i think.