your lucky i'm subjective.
you really need to work on a few things
1 if your frontal view of spries are'nt made and what you make looks atrocious get someone to do them for you. i can't do movies but i can make sprites. i'll be more than happy to help
2 your sound needs alot of work. if oyu wanna use music from games find the real version don't use midis there disgusting. try useing more frames and smoothen out the animation. it's choppy.
but it was'nt all bad. your plot is exellent the quips are very funny and you keep a good running gag but don't runn it to hard. good use of original character backgrounds in the over all story it worked well.
and one more thing. of your going to have a character use a spell try and take the image of the spell from a screenshot of the game and put it in the hard outline color blend spells look really bad.
all i am really trying to tell you is it was good but you need to work harder!! i wanna see you strive to be the best!